it's jerking the worst.
I am enjoying the best !
they're dying inside,
and i think i am living my rest!
i am more happy to feel ahead-
the threshold to the apex of bliss ..
no barricades on my way,
no bars to arrest my joy..
i have no guilts on dying
as that i would have on living anyhow..
because,
the place i needed to leave far earlier,
i am leaving it now!
my heart pounds of pride to know that
no cloud is exceeding us..
it's us who are falling down!
CRASH!!!!!!
12th july-2012 :)
Its beautiful like Sonnet 130 and moreover paradoxical effect made it's charm .
ReplyDeleteBut you can improve better on the deep meaning of poem rather then trying for rhyming scheme :)
i appreciate your suggestion :) thanks
Deletepessimistic and again optimistic.......but creation is good.....do your great at coming post.....dat...
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